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Learning Ally feedback

Tab: Finding My Dance

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Snapshot rev-2026-07-22T10:01:11Z-b3c2

Captured Jul 22, 2026 · 10:02

Imported by M. Alvarez (Learning Ally)

Reviewer of record: S. Brooks (Learning Ally)

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Candidate items

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Context / excluded

Matched titles

Unresolved

Unresolved ambiguities

Image-advance-before-narration passage may be a player behavior, not an EPUB defect — needs engineering assessment before routing.

Items with ambiguous title, version, page, scope, or routing are blocked from approval until a human resolves them or explicitly marks them unknown.

Matched titles

Finding My Dance· latest v4

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Overall Assessment

"Strong narration overall — a solid foundation for the illustrated-title workflow."

Image Feedback

"Pages 4–6: the image pauses too briefly before the next narration starts."

"Page 16: the text within the illustration should be narrated but is not."

"Pages 19 and 30: embedded alt text is being read aloud even though it duplicates the narrator's line."

Production & Formatting Feedback

"Pages 1 and 3: front matter deviates from Learning Ally's standard front-matter template."

"There appears to be a blank page between pages 1 and 2."

General Recommendations

"Would sentence-level highlighting be feasible in a future release?"

"The image advances before the previous narration ends — unclear whether this is the reader/player or the EPUB itself."

"Do we have a proper-name pronunciation resource we should be applying?"

Derived items (AI proposed · human-confirmed on approval)

Overall Assessment · Title-wide · v4
"Overall narration is strong and the title lays a solid foundation for the illustrated experience."
AI suggested: Positive overall assessment. Retained as reviewer context; no revision task.
AI suggested
No action/context
Image Feedback · Pages 4–6 · v4
"Pages 4–6: the image pauses too briefly before the next narration starts; readers do not have time to take in the illustration."
AI suggested: Image-pause too short on pp. 4–6. Title-wide editorial adjustment; may become guidance for illustrated titles.
AI suggested
Editorial revision
Image Feedback · Pages 8–9, 12–13, 18–19, 24–25 · v4
"Four two-page spreads (pp. 8–9, 12–13, 18–19, 24–25) show the image advancing before the prior narration completes."
AI suggested: Four two-page spreads share the same pacing behavior; grouped as one item with multiple locations. Uncertain whether the cause is player behavior or EPUB timing.
AI suggested
Joint review
Production & Formatting Feedback · Pages 1, 3 · v4
"Pages 1 and 3: front matter deviates from Learning Ally's standard front-matter template."
AI suggested: Front matter needs to match the Learning Ally standard. Title-specific editorial task plus reference to the standard.
AI suggested
Editorial revision
Audio Feedback · Title-wide · v4
"Are there Learning Ally resources for pronunciation of proper names, particularly non-English names?"
AI suggested: Reviewer question about proper-name pronunciation resources. Not a defect; a resource/coordination question between Learning Ally and Adaptive Reader.
AI suggested
Learning Ally clarification
Image Feedback · Page 16 · v4
"Page 16: the text within the illustration should be narrated but is not."
AI suggested: Image-embedded text on p. 16 should be narrated. Editorial narration task.
AI suggested
Editorial revision
Image Feedback · Pages 19, 30 · v4
"Pages 19 and 30: embedded alt text is being read aloud even though it duplicates the narrator's line."
AI suggested: Alt text is narrated in addition to the human narration. Editorial fix for these pages plus a candidate catalog-wide guidance item on when alt should/should not be voiced.
AI suggested
Joint review
Audio Feedback · Multiple spreads · v4
"In several spreads the next image advances before the prior narration ends; this may be a player behavior rather than an EPUB issue."
AI suggested: Reviewer explicitly flags player-vs-EPUB uncertainty. Engineering to reproduce against reference player and either confirm player-side or reclassify.
AI suggested
Adaptive Reader engineering
Production & Formatting Feedback · Between pp. 1 and 2 · v4
"There appears to be a blank page between pages 1 and 2."
AI suggested: Extra blank page in the front sequence. Editorial page-structure fix.
AI suggested
Editorial revision
General Recommendations · Reader feature · v4
"Would be helpful to have sentence-level highlighting in addition to word-level."
AI suggested: Reader feature request, not a title defect. Routed for roadmap consideration, not editorial revision.
AI suggested
Adaptive Reader engineering
General Recommendations · Catalog · v4
"Consider guidance for future illustrated titles on image pause length and when to voice alt text."
AI suggested: Explicit recommendation for illustrated-title guidance. Candidate Learning Ally production standard tying together EI-B02, EI-B03, and EI-B07.
AI suggested
Learning Ally clarification

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